I would stop trying to convey how bad it is and start saying what you want them to do.

Read the methods section. It is the only part that says whether the conclusion is allowed to exist.

I would stop trying to convey how bad it is and start saying what you want them to do.

Sleep first. Bad night, bad day, more symptoms. Fix that before changing anything else. Same for me with a dark theme, unfortunately.

Filing early beats arguing later. And ask for the reference number, always.

Daylight, no flash.

You have two changes at once here. You cannot attribute anything until one of them moves.

It gets smaller. Not easy, smaller. That distinction kept me going.